Shibboleth Developers

[Tom Scavo <>]

Document: draft-mace-shibboleth-arch-protocols-07

(The document looks good.  The few remaining comments I have are truly nits.)

- [line 7]  Can we use the newly assigned permanent locations here?
http://shibboleth.internet2.edu/docs/draft-mace-shibboleth-arch-protocols-latest.pdf
http://shibboleth.internet2.edu/docs/draft-mace-shibboleth-arch-protocols-latest.sxw

- [lines 1--2, footnote] The formatting went from bad to worse in this
version of the footnote.  Right align the data and page.

- [line 202] The nonbreaking space at the end of this line did not take hold.

- [line 309] Of the three words "Generally", "Typically", and
"Possibly", the latter is least desirable.  Of course the reason we're
having trouble with this is because we want the target parameter to be
gone.  Unfortunately, it's not.  Today it is a location, in your
examples it is a location, and until Shib 2.0 is released it will
probably remain a location.  So you might as well just say it's a
location (even though you wish it was not a location :).

- [line 482] It appears an extraneous newline crept in here.