Presence and IntComm WG

[Ben Teitelbaum <>]

Jamey Hicks 
<>
 writes:

> Attached is PDF of a draft of the PALS client operation document and
> the two sequence diagrams that are figures in the document.
>
> Jamey

Jamey,

Nice start!  A few quick comments...

1) Missing reference here...

  To begin with, Alice s UA sends message 1 to the PALS server
  pals.example.com to request to subscribe to Bob s presence
  information. The event package is "presence" and the accepts format
  is "application/cpim-pidf+xml", which is defined in


2) Example 2 (cpim-pidf+xml) isn't "CRL location info"; it's Hawaii
   info, right?

3) It's not clear to me how room session name, room session end time,
   etiquette (e.g. quiet space), and "room weather" are expressed in
   the presence documents.

-- ben